Elemental Witches Inspired Poem

This poem was included in my original manuscript for Potion. However, since I decided to serialized my story on Amazon’s Kindle Vella, it got cut. In the manuscript the poem didn’t need a title but I feel like I do now. But I haven’t been able to come up with a title I like. Since it was inspired by elemental witches, I thought about naming it that, however, taking out of context, it doesn’t really work. I also thought about Elements or I Am but those seemed boring. I also thought abut using a line from the poem, but none described the entire poem. Now that I’m relooking at it, maybe Same as You Breathe? Hmmm. What do you think about that. Or any other suggestions?

Love, Laughter, and Fairy Tales,


Water will soar through my veins until I die.

Raindrops my solace and thunderstorms my light.

Born without wings but with the desire to fly.

Breezes kiss my dewy eyes saying good night.

Dirty fingers I adore, indoors I cry.

My heart is like foliage, lush and green and bright.

The same as you breathe, fire lives inside of me.

Embers, my soul, burn for eternity.

20 Episodes of Potion have been uploaded to my serialized Kindle Vella Story, read the first three for free!

fairy tale, Poem, poetry, witches, Potion, dorlana vann, amwriting, elements, elemental witches, kindle vella, Amazon, writer, author, Im not a poet,
Potion by Dorlana Vann

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: